He went to Gustio’s kitchen in Paris and found a young man which became his best friend. They developed in their work very soon and the amount of costomers increased suddenly. One day Remy found that his friend was Gustio’s son, after that he became the master cook. One day, Eego, the most important enemy of Gustio came and invited the young man to deal. Man was scared but this wasn’t the soloution, he tried to explain all of story but it was very late!
After that Remy came back and helped his friend to cook a native French food called “RATATOUILLE”. When Eego ate the food, he was reminded to his childhood. He was surprised!!! That night they told all of story to Eego and after that the restaurant was closed by the government. But that wasn’t the end, they opened their new restaurant that it’s name was “RATATOUILLE”! It’s cook master was a rat, a rat that’s called “Remy”!!!
3 comments:
Hey Milad, That's great. I thought putting a picture would make it more attractive. Don't you mind it? Your writing is admirable, just I noticed this point, which I hope will be useful:
You wrote:"That night they told all of story to Eego..." Instead we shall say "That night they said all of the story to Eogo.." You know, we use tell in this way:
"I told him the story." not "I told the story to him". That's all. Sorry if it was boring...
Very good summary. Maybe you can write instead of me when my turn arrives!
Its a nice idea to put summery of film here.its also a good way to improve our writing and others can correct it.
found a young man which became his best friend.~found a young man who became his best friend.
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