A poor mother with her baby on her warm hands walked on the street. The Mother went to orphanage door and after an oppressive bye she left her child there and went back.
10 years later the child -named Louis- grew up and he became a good inventor. Some couples had been coming for taking him as child but his personality was special and he fault many times. As the faults had increased he decided to make a system that shows the future.
When he went to show his job at a competition a villain person appeared with his hat and his hat went and corrupt his system and he fault again and he became so sad and destroyed all of things related to that system. The boy named Robber came and said that: he follows a time machine rubbery and he is from the future. Robber brought Louis to the future and Louis found her family at future and Robber is son of himself also he found that the villain person was his poor roommate at his orphanage that because of his fault he became a bad person and he really was not a bad person And the hat –one of his invention- was not work properly and steal the time machine and going to register the invention as its invention and changing whole word in bad manner.
Louis went back to the past time by the time machine and prevented the hat to register the invention as his roommate invention and the competition ended in normal way and the invention was registered as his invention and her parents whom he saw at future adopted him.
By
Reza
1 comment:
I think it's enchanting Reza, as you have spent good time for writing this. If you like I just remark some points which I hope will both be useful for you and welcomed:
"fault" as a verb is not used this way "...his personality was special and he fault many times.". Here it seems we'd better say "He made mistakes for many times." or "He made a mess of his inventions."
Is this sentence correct?: "...And the hat –one of his invention- was not work properly"
By the way I liked the opening of your summary describing the way Louis was left by his mum.
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